I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Ms Aireen.
Friday, 8 November 2013
Thursday, 7 November 2013
Friday, 1 November 2013
Thursday, 31 October 2013
My writing work.
Use this picture to create a narrative story.%
Remember:
- Figurative Language
- Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
- Structure (O, P, S, R)
- Precise (interesting) words
- Speaking parts between characters
- Character and Setting descriptions!
Start here:one morning while i was sleeping in my bed i could hear big waves splashing over people houses.I stood up out of my bed and ran downstairs and ran outside it wasn't sunny but it looks like it going to rain .1 reason is if it rains the rain will make it more worse and everybody will die.2 reason is if it doesn't rain everybody should get up the mountain and some of us will still be alive.
Wednesday, 30 October 2013
My writing story.
There were two kids called zelda and fillex and they away in a store where nobody can see them.Fillex was the biggest hes the one that brown straight hair it was dark as a bear fer but it wasn't that dark. zelda was the youngest she had curly hair bright like the sun .
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