Friday, 30 August 2013

My Writing.

1 comments:

Lavinia said...

Hi Amelia

Wow!! I love your writing you wrote it is very interesting. My favourite part on your story was when you wrote the breeze coming towards me it's like the whole worlds is freezing. But I think next time the only thing you need to work on is adding some more detail to your writing so it will really make your work really stand out.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AMELIA :)

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